Inflatopia critique

My team mates said that my proposal idea for making a Wash dome was a good one because it could be constructed anywhere, the sketch really helped determine what the model was supposed to be. The piece ended up being changed to make a shower stall with a dome over it and a shower head to promote Wash. My idea could be blown up with air and plastic and not require a frame to keep it supported, one of the things they suggested was that the model be more detailed like the sketch because the sketch looked more like the proposal instead of a presentation. My idea to have people interact with this piece is to walk inside and have them push through the objects and get a sense and experience how students who take wash feel about wash. The piece will be blown with fans and hopefully we will only have to use one extension cord. There will be lots of plastic objects inside the structure and everyone will be contributing by adding something that they like or dont like about Wash.